the script!!!!
for the whole sequence
the first scene is the four main girls of the show in their dorm room, it starts of with yang making a joke when ruby the main character of the show bursts in saying that her and her sister yang's uncle is coming to visit. as ruby states his soon arrival their uncle qrow attampets to make a dramatic entrance but fail as he smacks into the window (in the show he can turn into a crow so thats how he was going to enter). he has another failed attempt before entering the dorm room and open the window before exiting to do his dramatic entrance. at the end of the scene ruby hugs him and they both fall out the window.
for the second scene it is a protest of the teachers saying more homework while the students are protesting against that. the scene ends up being put on neo (a character who doesn't speak at all) is about to speak in a megaphone but ends up being anticlimactic as she doesn't end up talking
as i shortened the sequence i wont add the story board of the final scene as i didn't end up adding it in.
for the voice actors i plan on having:
Ruby: me
Weiss: jade
Blake: Darcey
Yang: Faye
Jaune: idk
Qrow: My Father
first 4 seconds is the into : rwby chibi - said by the 4 main gal's
the four main gal's: rwby chibi
yang is bout to make a joke
Yang: and she said-
Blake: (monotone voice, very uninterested) 'now thats a katana'.
Weiss: get new jokes, yang.
yang sticks her tongue out at Weiss
interrupted by ruby kicking open the door
Ruby: guy's! shut up! i just got the most incredible new's!
camera goes to Blake with a swoosh sound
Blake: what is it?
camera goes back to ruby with a swoosh sound
Ruby: UNCLE QROW IS COMING TO VISIT!!!!
ruby bounces around the room
yang gasps
Yang: oh my gosh, I cant wait!
bird wings flapping
smack on window
slide on window
fall on the floor
little pause
Weiss: your uncle Qrow? isn't he the drunk loudmouth?
Ruby: he prefers, 'reckless rogue'.
Yang: he's super cool!
Ruby: all the time!
bird wings flapping
smack on window
slide on window
fall on the floor
Blake: I suppose there are worse role models out there.
Yang: I mean, he's definitely cool, but I'm not sure Id go as far to say role model.
Ruby: I'm telling him you said that.
running in the background slowly getting louder
door opening
Qrow runs in, breathing heavily
opens window and runs away still breathing heavy
Blake looks at window then at door with whooshing sounds
Qrow runs a little more then it stops
Blake: was that, your uncle Qrow?
birds wing flapping
Qrow (bird version) transforms into Qrow (human version)
Qrow: TA-DA!!
Ruby: (excited) ah! uncle Qrow
Qrow: no, wait!
Qrow fall out the window with ruby, Qrow yells as he falls down
sound of Qrow in pain after the fall
Yang: he's really cool!
this is the first 1 minute 2 seconds
TRANSITION TO NEXT SCENE
starts 1 minute 4 seconds
happy music plays in the background
whoosh and pop sound to move across to other people
and more whooshing with the character's movements
Neo (who doesn't talk) is about to talk so climactic music plays and then cuts and she doesn't talk
another whoosh
no real sound or voices
this is in the 1 minute 22 second mark
TRANSITION TO NEXT SCENE
slide sound and then the sound of Jaune being scared and running
then he smashes into the window
then he slides down in pain
whisper arguing:
jaune: i don't wanna
yang: do it
jaune: no she'll..
yang: just do it, come on
yang pushes jaune and he makes a sound of him getting hurt.
whooshing sounds
jaune: Weiss i'm taking you out for dinner tonight wear something pretty and DOnt be late.
Weiss: okay
yang: thats it! now you're being a yang man
ruby:what weird thing are you guys doing?
jaune: yang's my new life coach, she's teaching me to get what I want by being more assertive!
jolly music in the background
Zwei sniffing Jaune
Zwei bounces
Zwei about to pee on Jaune
jaune: stop!
Zwei barks then does a sad bark
ding noise
still jolly music in the background
noise of bowl sliding towards jaune
jaune hits the table
jaune: more!
whoosh sound
the server makes a sad sigh
still jolly music in the background
plates and bowls lightly hitting each other as the server is finding something within the bowls
jaune is triumphant laughter
grim sniffing a tree
jumps and is ready to pee
jaune: don't!
the Grimm crawls away a bit and is sad as he was told off
yang claps
jaune: now how about a little appetiser before dinner *smoochie noises*
bounce noise
wiess: ew i changed my mind
weiss freezes jaune and walks away
wiess: *humming*
jaune: uh, okay, message recieved. may have gone too far, uh can someone let me out please?
ruby walks away too
yang: yeah, he's not ready to be a yang man *as she walks away*
zwei walks toward jaune and sniffs the ice around him
zwei bounces and begins to pee on jaune
jaune: yeah that makes sense
happy end music
the cut noise and image
flapping of a birds wings - flapping fabric around.
kicking open a door - kick or hit a door, or table (pretty much anything that would sound like wood or door-like).
swoosh sounds -plastic pipe thing
smacking on the window - same as the door but with a different material to make it sound like glass
slide on window - slide my hand down a window
fall on the floor from a height - jumping sound could maybe work
running in a hallway - for this sound i will probably do what it actually is - basically i will run in a hallway
dog sniffing - just make sniffing noises
dog bark - immitate a dogo
bowl noise 1 sliding bowl - push a bowl across a counter
bowl noise 2 bowls clashing - do the same as the actual scene
hitting of a table - do the same as the actual scene
claps - claps
freezing something - glass hitting each-other for a high pitched shiiingg noise
however some of these won't be used as i decided to shorten it.
i have decided to not do the final scene as i want this project to be of quality rather than quantity.
for the recording I booked out the sound room for darcey's, faye's and jade's lines and for me, my dads and the foley i plan to record it at home on the mics we have.
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